The following scene is full of obvious exposition. Rewrite the scene using conflict, humor, or a confidante to replace obvious exposition.
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SAL
So when did you move to Cleveland?
TED
About two years ago.
SAL
You are kidding.I moved here two years ago myself.
TED
What are you doing now?
SAL
I work for a large investment banker.
TED
Im a successful umpire.
SAL
I love baseball.But I have no time to go anymore, let alone play.I used to be a pitcher on the banks softball team.
TED
Im getting a little bored with it, actually.
SAL
How could you? Everyone loves baseball.My kids especially do.
TED
I have no kids.
SAL
I thought you were married.
TED
I was. We divorced.My wife was very selfish; she didnt want to ruin her figure with children.
SAL
I have three great kids.
TED
Thats great.
SAL
One from each of my marriages.But the third time is the charm; my new wife is a wonderful woman.
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